User:Gnaparicio/Kikino Metis Settlement/Gvelek Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gnaparicio


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gnaparicio/Kikino_Metis_Settlement?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Kikino Metis Settlement

Evaluate the drafted changes
Obviously, your draft needs a lot of formatting work before it can be made live. I suggest you review similar wiki-pages table-of-contents to have an idea of how your wiki page should be organized. The "History" Section, in my opinion, is what needs the most work content-wise. Who was on the land before 1938? I would also like to have more information about these key events that you listed: Silver Birch Rodeo, Slo-Pitch Tourney, Metis Triathlon, Celebration days. Give us some flavor text about what these events are all about, unless there already exists a wiki page about them, then you can simply hyperlink to the relevant wiki page. You have a start on collecting your sources, but the more sources you have, the more reliable you are, so I would try and look for a handful more to strengthen your argument. Even with the poor presentation, I think implementing this edit would definitely increase the quality of the wiki-page. With a little rearranging you could make this look quite professional, great job!