User:Gnmahon18/Wildlife conservation/GoldFinch14 Peer Review

General info
Gnmahon18
 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Gnmahon18/Wildlife conservation
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Wildlife conservation

Evaluate the drafted changes
Grace I really like the addition of the Tik Tok article. It helps connect a more "old fashioned" topic to the present in an engaging way. I like the information you added to the climate change section but it needs citations. Also, don't forget to update the lead to reflect the things you added. All of your sources seems pretty up to date, which is important because the topic of wildlife conservation changes a lot. All the information seems organized and concise, which is great. The content you added also seems pretty neutral, just stating the facts without having a favored side. Overall, I really like what you added and I think all you really need is citations. Nice job Grace!!!