User:GoKnights2021/Google Ad Manager/The Silvarius Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

GoKnights2021


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Google Ad Manager Draft
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Google Ad Manager Article

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Content


 * Functionality is relevant content because it is important to understanding how the program works for casual viewers
 * Content is relatively up-to-date

Tone & Balance


 * Overall neutral tone and simply stating facts

Sources & References


 * Sources are from within the last 2 years and not outdated in information
 * While most are blog posts, the information remains mostly neutral and factual

Organization


 * The final two sentences feel repetitive on its info on granular targeting
 * Grammar error in last sentence -> need a space after "operating systems"