User:Gobears18/FiscalNote/Wafflehouse777 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gobears18


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gobears18/FiscalNote?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * FiscalNote

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The author does a good job of developing and adding sections to the article. The writing appears to have a neutral tone. For the awards section, it would be helpful to elaborate more on the significance of each distinction and the organization with which it is associated, while avoiding sounding like a tangent and instead focusing on how it contributes to FiscalNote's reputation and the overall big picture.