User:Goblue2023/Grace Campbell/Chriscsims Peer Review

The lead is very good in my opinion. It gives you the general understanding of what the article is about. It also gives you a glimpse of her political career. The early life section is brief and smoothly transitions into the section about her career. It gives you the details that you need for an early life section like education, parents, and hometown. The content of this article is relevant and does not include any unnecessary information. The tone of the article is balanced and not swaying towards any party. The content of this article also includes the necessary information to understand Campbell. It includes her work for the socialist party which is very important to understanding more about Campbell. The organization is also very structured and concise in the article. Information is in the sections that it needs to be in. Overall very good and organized.

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