User:Gobrans17/Ctenocephalides felis/Elizlilyd Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sabrina R Gobran (Gobrans17)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gobrans17/Ctenocephalides_felis?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cat flea

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead:


 * The lead provides a good overview of the main points of the insect
 * The added sentence about the flea being found globally is useful, although adding in a citation would make the statement more credible.

Content:


 * The added content is relevant to the insect.

Tone and Balance:


 * The "Treatment" section's language is a little non-neutral--it seems like instructions for somebody seeking to eradicate fleas.
 * Try removing words like "important" and "essential" to make the language more neutral.

Sources and References:


 * Check to make sure that references are inserted properly, as most sections do not have references cited at all.
 * The existing sources look credible, as they are from reviewed sources.
 * Also, considering linking to other Wikipedia articles.

Organization:


 * The "Insecticide resistance" section may be able to be a subsection under a broader topic (maybe the Treatment section?).
 * Consider copying the complete original article over to see where the added material will best fit in.

Images and Media:

(Not a new article)
 * The original article has images and media (I believe we are not allowed to add images unless we have the rights to them).

Overall Impression:
 * The insecticide section has added to the article because it brings up a relevant issue related to the insect. To make the article more credible, make sure to cite sources often and properly throughout the article.