User:Godawgs598/Suzinne Pak-Gorstein/Jordanm12 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Godawgs598


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Godawgs598/Suzinne_Pak-Gorstein?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * N/A

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

Really great lead! Offers a good summary of the rest of the article while staying concise. If you wanted to you could probably link some key words to other wikipedia articles.

Content

All content appears relevant and up to date. All your sections offer a good level of detail and provide a really good overview of who Suzinne Pak-Gorstein is and her accomplishments. I particularly like your section Leadership Positions and Mentorship. I found it super interesting and it really makes your article stand out. For the selected publications section, it may be good to bold Suzinne Pak-Gorstein's name.

Tone and Balance

Tone is neutral throughout. All viewpoints are equally represented and no claims appear to be biased towards a particular viewpoint.

Sources and References

This article uses a diverse array of sources. All content appears to be backed up by reliable secondary sources, and all sources I checked worked.

Organization

Content is well written and the sections flow really well.

Images and Media

Really great use of pictures throughout. If you wanted, it may be beneficial to add a picture in the research section. Also if you are able to you should add an image of Suzinne Pak-Gorstein to the info box.

New Articles

Article follows patterns of similar articles. Many key words are linked to other wikipedia articles, but I think you could still add some more, especially in your lead and in the section on research.

Overall Impressions

Overall this is a fantastic article! You clearly went above and beyond for this assignment, and it shows in the quality of your work. This offers a great overview of Suzinne Pak-Gorstein and I'm sure she will be really happy the page.