User:GoforPapaPalpatine/Lone Wolf and Cub/Zealora Peer Review

Hey, Palpatine! Nice to be able to read your writing again!

First of all, the tone you have written here definitely feels like a Wikipedia article. It’s not “over representing” anything, and Some suggestions for you, though: You might want to be more specific on what kind of Japanese story elements “Lone Wolf and Cub” is presenting (unless it’s somewhere else in the actual article). On a different note, I thought that it was possible to create links to the EBSCOHOST login, so it can take you right to the article you found — I would love that addition. Overall, nice work! Good luck on the rest of your project! Zealora (talk) 04:25, 9 November 2019 (UTC)