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Summary 1
Prologue: The book begins in the hospital were Dana was treated because she lost her left arm. Kevin was in police station. Police was asking him how Dana lost her hand. The police also came to her to asking of it was Kevin fault. But in the end they let him go. Goga1994 (talk) 20:28, 2 April 2014 (UTC)

The River: June 9 1976, was Dana twenty-sixth birthday. It was also the day that Rufus called her for the first time. It all began when they move from Los Angeles to Altadena. When suddenly she feels dizzy then everything vanished around her. She ends up in the ground surround by trees. Near her was a river where she sees a child splashing, screaming for help. The narrator runs to save the small boy but he was not breathing so she decided to make artificial respiration on him. It helped save his life. After couple of minute’s man with guns come and want to shoot her. But she felt dizzy and end up again in the house. She didn't understand what has happened to her and the fact that she was wet scared her more. Goga1994 (talk) 14:44, 2 April 2014 (UTC)

The Fire: Dana was very frightened that any moment she would be back at the river. When Kevin and Dana sit down for dinner she starts to feel dizzy again. She ends up sitting on the small bad in the child room. She sees that the small boy was playing with fire, immediately she through the burning draperies out of the window. After that she was waiting to go home and start to feel scared because the first time she save small the boy, she returns home immediately. This time was different, she was still there. She starts to talk to the small boy and finds out his name was Rufus and that it is the same boy that she saved from the river before. She also found out that she is in 1800's before the silver war and that he is her grand-grandfather. That he somehow marry her grand-grandmother Alice. Then Rufus takes her outside and show her the way how to get to Alice mother house. On the road she sees four white men that are patroller hit and kicking the door of the cabin. The take the man out of the house and ask for a pass that is a note from his owner that allows him to walk freely yet the black man didn’t have. Then they tied the black man to the tree and whip him. Furthermore they tied him to the horse and rode him away. After they left Dana when to the house and ask for help. Alice mother allowed Dana to stay for one day. When they decided to go back to sleep, the woman said she forgot the blanket outside. Dana volunteered to go and get the blanket. However, outside she sees one of the patrollers. He tries to grab her but she runs away to the woods. The man tackled her and brought her down to the ground. He was punching her with his fists and then she hears her name being called. She was back in the house with Kevin.Goga1994 (talk) 15:50, 2 April 2014 (UTC)

Summary 2
The Fall: This chapter begins with a story how Dana and Kevin met. Dana was working for Aerospace Company as a clerk-typist and writing articles for their company Newspaper. However, after she was working for some time the department she was working for was laid-off. Therefore, she when to a labor agency that helps people to fine jobs. There she gets a job at the auto-parts warehouse were Kevin worked. They start to talk and then date. Back to 1976, Kevin want to go to the library to fine information on how is the freedom paper looked like. They wanted to forge a freedom paper to protect Dana if she with be stopped. However, Dana was scared to go outside in the car. She was thanking if she would get dizzy again how she would come back. After couple of minutes, she starts to feel dizzy again and she was transported to the past but this time with Kevin. They start to look around and found themselves in the woods. Also they found Rufus lying in the ground with a broking leg. He was there with a young black boy named Nigel. Nigel went to the Rufus father to get help and call for a doctor. Meanwhile they stay with Rufus until his father would come. Tom Weylin is Rufus father; he arrived on a flatbed wagon with Nigel and with other black man to help him with Rufus. Tom Weylin invites Kevin for dinner and then later offers him a job to teach Rufus in the house while he is sick. Kevin and Dana start to live in the house. Kevin was teaching Rufus and Dana was helping in the kitchen and sometime reading to Rufus. Margaret Weylin was Rufus mother she did not like Dana. She was jealous because her son likes Dana more than her. In addition, she was jealous of the relationship between Kevin and Dana. Margaret wanted Kevin for herself. One day Nigel asked Dana to teach him to read and write. Dana agrees to teach him but one day Tom Weylin found her with a book teaching Nigel. Tom gets very angry he takes her outside and pushes her on the ground and begins to whip her. Kevin didn’t come on time and she passed out.Goga1994 (talk) 16:48, 2 April 2014 (UTC)

Summary 3
The Fight: This chapter begins with a story how Kevin asks Dana to marry him and she said yes. Therefore they went to their family to ask for a blessing and it was denied because of their racial differences. After disappointing talk to their family they decide to drive to Las Vegas and get marry. After her returning from her last trip, she found herself lying on the floor of her bathroom without Kevin. He was lift in the Weylin plantation. Dana was in lots of pain because of the whipping. However, after couple of day she was transported again to save Rufus. She found him fighting with a black man. Next to them was a black woman with ripped clothes. The woman was Alice and the black man was Isaac her husband. Isaac was beating Rufus because he tried to rape Alice. Dana with the help of Alice tries to convince Isaac not to kill Rufus. Furthermore, Dana gives Alice and Isaac plenty of time to run away. Also convinces Rufus not to say who hit him. However, Isaac and Alice were caught. They were beaten and ravaged by the dogs. As a punishment for helping Isaac to escape she was sold as a slave. When Rufus finds out that Alice being sold he runs to buy her. Dana with the help of Rufus brings Alice back to health. After she got stronger Rufus forces Dana to convince Alice to sleep with him by threatening her if she will refuse. After that Dana finds out that Rufus lied about sending letters to Kevin because of that she attempts to run away. However was caught and whipped badly. Tom Weylin finds out that Rufus promised to send letter and lied about it. Therefore Tom sends the letter to Kevin himself say that Dana had return. After a while Kevin has come for Dana. They try to escape but Rufus catches them on the road and threaten to shoot. But they manage to return together back to 1976. User:Goga1994|Goga1994]] (talk) 16:05, 17 March 2014 (UTC)Goga1994 (talk) 18:06, 2 April 2014 (UTC)

Summary 4
The Storm: Kevin and Dana return safely back. But it was difficult for Kevin to adjust to his new environment because he spends five years in 1800’s. He forgot many things for example how to drive. After few days, Dana travel again to save Rufus. She finds him lying face down in a puddle. He was very drunk and sick. Tom Weylin forces Dana to take care of Rufus. Rufus was very sick and weak for many weeks. Tom Weylin had a heart attack Dana tries to save him but he dies anyways. Rufus blames Dana because she couldn’t save his father. As a punishment Rufus send her to work in the field until she collapses and then Rufus allows her to return to the house. Alice complaint to Dana that Rufus is very aggressive with her. However when Dana is around he becomes very come and loving. Alice also fears that she is getting used to Rufus, also she doesn’t hate him enough anymore. She is afraid of the feeling of enjoyment that she has when she is with Rufus. Therefore she wants to run away as soon as she can. Also in this chapter Alice gives birth to her four child Hager who liter becomes Dana direct ancestor. Also Margaret Weylin’s returns and asks that Dana would become her aid. Rufus sells a field slave because he was flirting with Dana. When Dana tries to stop the sell, Rufus hits her. Dana goes to the attic were she slits her wrists in an effort to return home.Goga1994 (talk) 19:18, 2 April 2014 (UTC)

The Rope: Dana was home for many days. On the July 4 Kevin friends came to invite them to spent a day with them. Dana refused to go because she was afraid transferring again. After couple of minutes arguing she starts to feel dizzy again. She fined Rufus well but at this time Alice was in trouble. Alice committed a suicide because Rufus sold her children. But in reality sent them off to live with his aunt in Baltimore. He wants to cause her pain because she attempted to run away with the children but she was caught and whipped badly. As a punishment he told her that he sold the children. She was sick with the grief and at the end kills herself. Rufus tells Dana that she looks like Alice. Rufus attempted to take Dana by force but she refused. As a self-defense she kills Rufus but because he was holding on to her arm she transferred without her left arm. As a result she loses her left arm.Goga1994 (talk) 19:59, 2 April 2014 (UTC)

Epilogue: After Dana’s arm was well, Kevin and Dana rent a car to drive to see Weylin’s plantation. They didn’t find the house. But they found records that said Rufus was killed in the fire. They also found record of slave being sold except for Nigel, Carrie and two of the Rufus children.Goga1994 (talk) 20:17, 2 April 2014 (UTC)

Butler's Biography Assignment
a)The lead section is understandable and only has small language problems. b)The article's structure clear but needs small help. There are some information is missing. c)The information about the series of her books is missing. It should be written anther the Series section. d)I thing all the sections in this article need more information. e)The language of the article okay. g)The article has many problems with the sources and the sources have documented problems. Goga1994 (talk) 20:15, 17 March 2014 (UTC)