User:GoldenIsland2124/Somatic cell/Aleahlani Peer Review

Adding references into this paper has been so great to help establish the credibility of the page. If you can find a source, perhaps even a news article, citing Dolly the Sheep and Snuppy the dog and the dates that I believe you have added near their names, that would be awesome. I do love that you added the dates, it adds a nice touch and make it sound more official.

"The cryoconservation of animal genetic resources as a means of conserving animal genetic material in response to decreasing ecological biodiversity." I think this is a great sentence, but it is not a complete sentence. You could write that it "is a means" to make sure the grammar is correct here.

I also love that you add a line about TALENs and CRISPR as the means for gene cloning, obviously that is a very important addition and get more into the biophysical side of cloning. That might be a good section to flesh out a bit with some more biophysics information, but so far I think this is fantastic!

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