User:Goldfinch12/Al-Andalus/Bandzvlad Peer Review

I really like this article and the way it was written. The information is dense and concise, which is really great. There are a lot of details, and I like the fact that there are examples stated!

I would maybe suggest to just rearrange the paragraphs slightly in order to make it less dense when reading, that way people can actually go through all the details you've given as they are really relevznt and important.

For this line : "We don't need to emphasize the importance of calligraphy in Islamic art here. The visual shape of Arabic script conveys a significant message about Islam in and of itself. Arabic was chosen by God to be the language of the Qur'an, giving it a hallowed quality.", as evidence of this fact, I would suggest adding one of the phrases of Surah Taha of the Quran, stating that "Wakathalika anzalnahu qur-anan AAarabiyyan" which translates in English to "And thus We have sent it down as an Arabic Qur'an" :)

This might be a bit too much but, in Algeria the architecture has a lot of points in common with the architecture in the Andalus region, which is relevant and related to our history, which you could maybe relate to the writing styles.

That was really good!!!

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I really like this article and the way it was written. The information is dense and concise, which is really great. There are a lot of details, and I like the fact that there are examples stated!

I would maybe suggest to just rearrange the paragraphs slightly in order to make it less dense when reading, that way people can actually go through all the details you've given as they are really relevznt and important.

For this line : "We don't need to emphasize the importance of calligraphy in Islamic art here. The visual shape of Arabic script conveys a significant message about Islam in and of itself. Arabic was chosen by God to be the language of the Qur'an, giving it a hallowed quality.", as evidence of this fact, I would suggest adding one of the phrases of Surah Taha of the Quran, stating that "Wakathalika anzalnahu qur-anan AAarabiyyan" which translates in English to "And thus We have sent it down as an Arabic Qur'an" :)

This might be a bit too much but, in Algeria the architecture has a lot of points in common with the architecture in the Andalus region, which is relevant and related to our history, which you could maybe relate to the writing styles.

That was really good!!!