User:Goldie18/User:CPM1999/Internet meme/Goldie18 Peer Review

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CPM1999


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 * User:CPM1999/Internet meme
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 * Internet meme

Lead
Instead of wikilinking the entire article add something like "often through social media platforms like iFunny" and only wikilink iFunny. Apply to entire lead.

Very clear on topic but could use some cited sources.

Lead is concise and added information is cited and accurate. Could have more wikilinks for "popculture reference" or "participatory culture"

Content
"People sharing the post tended to add the same caption to it ("they did surgery on a grape")" I don't think you need parentheses here.

Link MyDavidCameron.com if it still exists.

"There is no single format that memes must follow. Photographs of people or animals, especially stock photos, can be turned into memes by superimposing text, such as in Overly Attached Girlfriend. Rage comics are a subcategory of memes which depict a series of human emotions and conclude with a satirical punchline; the sources for these memes often come from webcomics. Rage comics and memes created for the sole purpose of becoming memes would normally be original works of the creator and therefore, the question of infringing other copyright work does not arise. Other memes are purely viral sensations such as in Keyboard Cat." Find a source for this.

"The Internet also facilitates the rapid evolution of memes." Elaborate more.

Content is relevant and up-to-date

Could add images of memes. Needs more images.

Tone and Balance
"Colloquially, the terms meme and Internet meme are used more loosely, having become umbrella terms for any piece of quickly-consumed comedic content that may not necessarily be intended to spread or evolve." add source to make this less opinionated

"Many modern memes stem from nonsense or otherwise unrelated phrases that are repeated and placed onto other formats."

Sources and References
Find sources that are more reliable. Avoid .com sources.

Possible sources you could use:


 * The Meme Machine by Susan Blackmore.
 * Controversies in Meme Theory (pages 182-241)

Content could be backed up by more sources. For example, the last paragraph needs a source.

Links all work

Organization
Content is concise and well-written

Sections were not marked

Images and Media
No images

Overall Impressions
Good content just needs more reliable sources.