User:GonFreecss999/Great Dismal Swamp/CBM33 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

GonFreecss999


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:GonFreecss999/Great_Dismal_Swamp?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Great Dismal Swamp

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead - I think that the inclusion of more information on the maroons who lived in the region is a great idea. I also agree with you that more information on the literature the swamp is featured in would be beneficial to the article.

Intro - I appreciate that you linked an article about the maroons.

History - The history section is concise and to the point. The tone generally seems to be neutral. Maybe include a source for the first sentence about the swamp holding a place in the minds of those who live near it. I am not sure if the part about white slave owners "eager to keep the power structure static" comes across as neutral enough for Wikipedia's liking. The word eager there sounds a bit like inference, even if it is entirely true.

Citations - All of your sources seemed both topical and reliable.