User:Gopherfrog47/Urban prairie/GreenJadeNeocaridina Peer Review

General info
Gopherfrog47
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gopherfrog47/Urban_prairie?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Urban prairie

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Overall, you additions are well-put and easy to understand. I appreciate the addition of the environmental benefits of urban grasslands. I would even say that this information is substantially different what is already in the Wiki page to warrant a new heading pertaining to environmental consequences of urban grasslands. I also appreciate the information you added to some of the reasons urban grasslands occur. It helps provide context to the topic. One thing I was left unclear on is the difference between urban prairies and urban grasslands, of there is a difference. If there is a difference, it may be helpful to outline this more clearly. Generally, your rewrites and additions track well with the Wikipedia style, but a couple sentences in the last paragraph you added do not come off as completely neutral (the sentence about how they better human life is an example of this). As ecologists, I know it is hard to write about ecological topics from an unbiased standpoint, but in this section, it almost feels like you are arguing in favor of urban grasslands rather than simply providing information about them. Your citations look great, and are well-used to support the information you provide in the last paragraph. The only suggestion I would have in regard to citations is to perhaps provide support for the information in the first article body paragraph if articles are available. You did a great job of connecting your additions to other pages. I have no comments for improvement in this area, as you already have it covered. I think this is a great start in working towards your final Wikipedia page edits. Great job, and good luck going forward!