User:Gopiga.dass/Deafness in Tunisia/Redpanda2301 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gopiga.dass


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Deafness in Tunisia

Lead

 * I think this is a great start for a lead section. It is concise and has relevant statistics to begin the article.
 * I am confused how social traditions would increase the rate of deafness in isolated communities. Could you explain this point further?
 * Make sure to add a brief description of the article's major sections in the future.

Content

 * The content you included was relevant.
 * Almost all of the content is up to date. If there are more recent sources with similar information, try to include those instead of the ones from 2004. I know from personal experience that that isn't always possible!

Tone and Balance

 * Your tone was neutral and to the point.
 * I did not see any biased information.

Sources and References

 * Great mix of academic and non-academic sources; some are more recent than others, but I'm sure the older ones have lots of relevant information!
 * All of the links I checked work properly.
 * You did a great job citing your information all the way throughout your article.

Organization

 * Your "significant organizations" section could be clearer and easier to read if it wasn't broken up and if you used sub-headings.
 * Your "language deprivation" section could likely be split into two sections. It seemed like most of that section was about early hearing detection.
 * I did not see any grammatical or spelling errors.

New Articles

 * Your article does meet Wikipedia's notability requirements.
 * You have a great list of sources. I'd be interested to know if anything you chose was written by someone who's deaf.
 * Nice job including links to other Wiki articles!

Overall impressions

 * Overall, I think this is a great start! You have a lot of information from various sources.
 * I think that reorganizing some of your sections will improve your article overall. It will also be great to see the completed project!