User:Gopp22/Germans of Serbia/Bsantiago97 Peer Review

General info
Gopp22
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Gopp22/Germans of Serbia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Germans of Serbia

Evaluate the drafted changes
It looks like you have references and plans to strengthen the integrity of the article. Reframing the Lead of the article so it does not have a warning as its opening is a very good idea. It sounds like the article as stands is not made with facts. There is not much to review, looks like you have a lot of ideas but only reference two areas that you are going to change directly. Your plan leans heavily on reference strengthening but does not touch on content much.

You only listed the existing references in the article, and included one quote from your references. I would have benefited from seeing your list of references you plan to use. Also, the only reference you have from your research shows a direct quote. It's not in your words, which Wiki is strongly against.

Overall, you have made clear what is wrong with the article, but do not show what you will add.