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Dan Frawley during the 1981 AHL season, played for the Cornwall Royals. That season the team went on to win the memorial cup in a game against the Kitchener Rangers.

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http://www.recorder.ca/2010/03/19/frawley-giving-back-to-the-game (Reference was already used in the article however, whoever used it left out this fact)

William Daniel Frawley (born June 2, 1962) is a Canadian retired professional ice hockey player. During his junior hockey years, Frawley played for the Sudbury Wolves of the OHA and the Cornwall Royals of the QMJHL, before being drafted by the Chicago Black Hawks, 204th overall in the 1980 NHL Entry Draft. Frawley spent most of the next two years playing in the AHL. In 1981, Frawley won the memorial cup while playing for the Cornwall Royals against the Kitchener Rangers.

He played with the Blackhawks during the 1984–85 season (his NHL rookie season). On the 7 October 1985, Frawley was picked up off waivers by the Pittsburgh Penguins, the team he'd spent the next four years (the rest of his NHL career) with. His apparent leadership on the Penguins, was recognized with his appointment as captain in October 1987, a role he would hand over to Mario Lemieux two months later, because of a torn ligament that kept him out of the lineup. He received surgery for the injury and returned to play in 1988.

Keeping active in the First Nations community, Frawley and other former indigenous NHL players, such as Ted Nolan, John Chabot, and Denny Lambert took part in a charity match in Wikwemkiong First Nation against the local police force January 28, 2017. Frawley and many other former native NHL players are very active in their native communities, engaging native youth as motivational speakers teaching about the importance of education, goal setting, substance abuse, and life skills that the future native leaders will need. They often host hockey clinics to encourage both young male and female athletes to enhance their physical skills as well as to develop an understanding of teamwork and cooperation with others. Since 2007, Frawley currently is coaching minor hockey in the small native community of Chisasibi, using hockey as a means to teach young native athletes about the importance of education and physical activity. Initally, he was a hockey instructor for the Chisasibi Junior hunters minor midget team, and is now a youth hockey coordinator in Chisasibi.

In 2007, Frawley became a hockey instructor for the Chisasibi Junior hunters minor midget team. (http://www.recorder.ca/2010/03/19/frawley-giving-back-to-the-game) (Reference was already used but left this out)

He is currently the youth hockey coordinator in Chisasibi (https://www.hittheice.tv/coaches/?int_RepertoryItemId=749&int_PositionId=8)

Assessment of the Dan Frawley article

-Information on him is pretty vague, and I checked the sources out a bit and a fair amount of information about him was left out

-As far as referencing goes, the references are accurate and used well, however, the article is missing references for the first bit of the information on him. But there is a catch to this, they included his stats in the wiki article about him so, we can assume that the information on where he played and when is accurate.

-As far as viewpoints go, the article maintains a steady neutral viewpoint throughout and does not seem to do anything more than state the facts, which is exactly what we want in a wiki article. No opinions.

-I believe the article was well paced, and didn't focus on any aspects of his life (even those that were more relevant such as his playing career) which acts as a thing going for and against the article. I believe they could've used more information on the athlete especially considering they could've used more from the references they had.

-There is also a lack of reference for a few facts such as facts about his induction into the Amerks hall of fame. The point about that is currently supported by no reference