User:Gpanetti/Bilingual education/Umelsa Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gpanetti


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gpanetti/Bilingual_education?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Bilingual education
 * Bilingual education

Evaluate the drafted changes
The topic of Bilingual education can be broad so I like that the relevance to US English language learner is added. I feel like this was an important addition with concise and easy to read facts

provided. The content of the draft feels organized and equipped with neutral and unbiased tone. The reference of the facts added is a reliable source of NCES. Although there is no image provided in the draft but the original article already has images.

Overall a good well rounded effort to add an important detail to the original article.