User:Gpedro174/Aquatic toxicology/Marcou320 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gpedro174


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Gpedro174/Aquatic toxicology


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Aquatic toxicology

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Your content and quality look good. I do think your opening sentence feels disjointed with the remainder of the article in your draft. Like I know what you are going for here but at the same time it almost feels like a lead in to a totally different topic. I would also suggest making multiple smaller paragraphs out of your information here just to make it easier to read and follow along.