User:Grace.jana07/Tribal sovereignty in the United States/Cameronkalantar Peer Review

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Grace.jana07


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The amount of detail and information in this section is amazing and I find that it truly demonstrates a complete understanding of the topic and material in a condensed way. I find that breaking the topic down in various ways based on years and the policies that have been established makes it more digestible. With that said I think it may benefit your work to add further subheadings for each year that you are referencing to make it more structured. And within each subsection including information on the impact and long-term implications of the occurrence/event which will make each section more holistic. Overall, I find this to be very detailed and super informative and will definitely add to thre article.