User:Grace.volk7/Triphosgene/Lanerino Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

grace.volk7


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Grace.volk7/Triphosgene


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * triphosgene

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Lead
 * I like the changes you made to the lead. It is concise and well-written.
 * Content
 * You should consider adding some more wiki-links to words in the article.
 * For example, carboxylic acids on the last line under the 'uses' section.
 * Make sure the information in the table on the right side of the article is correct and up to date.
 * Tone
 * The article is in neutral tone with no obvious bias.
 * Sources
 * The sources that have links work and they are good, reliable sources.
 * To add to the coverage of the current sources, I suggest seeing if there is more important information from the sources already provided.
 * The new source is a good one, keep it up.
 * Organization
 * The content is concise and well written.
 * "While several properties of triphosgene are not yet readily available, it is known that it is very toxic if inhaled a toxic gas is emitted if it comes in contact with water."
 * This sentence is a little confusing to read, though I understand the content.
 * Overall
 * I like what you are doing to this article so far. Keep expanding on the content as much as you can. I didn't know what triphosgene was before I read and it helped my knowledge.