User:GraceCaccamo29/History of Dance/Jackiemcdonnell Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

GraceCaccamo29


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:GraceCaccamo29/History_of_Dance?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * History of dance

Evaluate the drafted changes
This is a well-written and organized article. The lead sentence tells exactly what the editor will be writing about. The content is relevant and interesting to read. The source links seem to be reliable and relevant to this article. The writing is neutral and solely provides unbiased information for readers. The work flows together in a clear and concise way. The article meets wikipedias requirements and appears to have little grammatical errors. This content adds variety to the original article by providing information solely on the history of Chinese dance. The ending sentence wraps the work together and provides a good conclusion.