User:GraceGAC/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Medicine in Star Trek

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article from a list of C-List Star Trek Wikipedia articles. I am a fan of Star Trek and was wondering if I could lend my knowledge to a lesser developed article. This article matters because it attempts to explain the astonishing medical advancements that are exhibited in Star Trek. When finished I believe it would be a valuable addition to the Star Trek page list. My preliminary impression was that this article was appropriately placed in the C-List category. Its explanations seem somewhat unfinished and unpolished. I hope to be able to contribute in a helpful way.

Evaluate the article
The lead section of this article seems a little overcomplicated, and it takes too long to get to the point. A reader looking for a short overview would likely be bored. I believe the content of the article is relevant, but it seems unpolished and less concise than it could be. I also believe it is lacking specific information in places where it may be helpful. The article is unbiased, but sometimes delves into unnecessary information. The sources of this article seem relevant, but the photos are not related to the topic at hand. They seem to be placeholders for photos from the actual show. The writing quality of this article could use an overhaul, and the talk page acknowledges this. It seems as though other Wikipedians agree that this page needs help.