User:GraceGAC/Rialto Bridge/Marperch Peer Review

General info
GraceGAC
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:GraceGAC/Rialto Bridge
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Rialto Bridge

Evaluate the drafted changes
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The article is quite informative about the Rialto Bridge in Venice. It tells us a lot about the bridge's history, which is important and makes it easier to understand why the bridge is famous. This makes the content very relevant to the topic.

Most of the time, the article sticks to the facts and doesn't give personal opinions. But sometimes, it uses words that show someone's point of view, like "audacious" or "legendary." To make the article more fair and objective, it's better to use words that describe things more clearly and don't show personal feelings.

The article is well-written and easy to follow. However, it has some small grammar mistakes, like using "the the" together. Fixing these mistakes would make the article even better.

The article does a good job of explaining the history of the bridge, which helps us understand why it's important in Venice. The article tells us about how the bridge was built, especially its strong foundation. This helps us understand why the bridge has lasted so long. The article mentions where it got its information. This is good because it shows that the information is reliable. All the sources and references are up to date as well!