User:GraceRequejo/Mira Nakashima/Ethan4757 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

GraceRequejo


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:GraceRequejo/Mira_Nakashima?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mira Nakashima

Evaluate the drafted changes
"Mira Nakashima-Yarnell (born 1942) is an architect and furniture maker. She is the daughter of George Nakashima and is now the President and Creative Director for George Nakashima, Woodworker," the lead of this article has introduce its theme clearly without overly detailed information. Not only It has been update for the academic research, and it also include the brief description without overly detailed.

I also like how the content itself includes numbers of reference which provide details of the person's career and legacy. Overall, the article itself is in a high quality; it includes clear information for its reader to comprehend.