User:GraceRinaldi/Parental abuse by children/KTilak02 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

GraceRinaldi


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:GraceRinaldi/Parental_abuse_by_children?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Grace's proposed changes for this article help make it more professional and informative than the current presentation of the topic. I like all the sources you've brought up to better support the article, and how she plans on incorporating it to build the article up. The content added is neutral and provides great background information. It also organizes the material better than it is currently organized, and makes it more readable and accessible. It would help if she added what exactly you want to add or specifically plan on adding clarifying detail too, but overall the edits proposed look good!