User:GraceRinaldi/Parental abuse by children/Kathleenmoran2 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

GraceRinaldi


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:GraceRinaldi/Parental_abuse_by_children?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Parental abuse by children

Evaluate the drafted changes
Grace is doing amazing rewriting this article, so far, and that all starts at the beginning with changing that title! I love the new title it defiantly goes so much better and is less confusing than what it used to be. The old title sounds like the child is being abusive but your point is that the child can be the person abusing someone else, not the parent. I think this is a great topic because you do not always victim blame a child right away but they can be hurting someone too in their family. I really like the list of reasons parental abuse may occur, I think bullet points like that catch the readers attention easily especially in wikipedia articles because not everyone loves reading so small and short is better.

'''I am glad you like my new title! As well, I'm happy you see my point that a child can abuse multiple different caregivers, not just "parents".'''