User:GraceRinaldi/Parental abuse by children/Oliviaheaney Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Grace Rinaldi


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Parental abuse by children

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

- I think you new title is very interesting and will grab the readers attention. I agree that is also needed to be boarder since it had other aspects to the article such as the grandparents like you said

- I think your edits are very clear and non bias.

- You added good new content