User:GraceRinaldi/Parental abuse by children/Seaturtle524 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

GraceRinaldi


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:GraceRinaldi/Parental_abuse_by_children?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Parental abuse by children

Evaluate the drafted changes
I agree with your point of the article title needing to be changed. It doesn't seem to completely encapsulate the main objective of this article. When doing editing, make sure to compose paragraphs that are reflective of your own work. Take the editing you have provided and utilize it within the paragraphs themselves. You can also do this by creating a new section of information. The content thats been used in this article is presented by a neutral perspective. The source you provided is very informational and will provide a great amount of support to the article. It may be better to refer to caretakers as parents and guardians.