User:Gracec6785/Lake Lacawac Limnology/Katiebusch7 Peer Review

Hi Grace,

Below are my comments on your first draft. Your current word count is 612 and you have 5 refs (2 scientific articles) make sure by the end you have at least 8 scientific articles.It is nice to see a word count over 600 though so good on you.

First I would like to say I love all the subsections, even if some of these stay small that is alright because hopefully it will spark someone to come and fill them out later on. Generally like I said in class make suer to link harder words to their own wiki page to make it easier on the reader who may not have a scientific background.

Overall it reads very well and is a great start. I would start to shift your focus on to the current research (Addie Ziesler and Michelle Little are both graduate students in Craig Williamson's lab who would gladly send you some references for this, just look their emails up in the miami directory)

-Katie

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