User:Gracec6785/Lake Lacawac Limnology/Lmnocarp Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gracec6785


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gracec6785/Lake_Lacawac_Limnology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like your article!

Some of the wording is a little awkward. "The other habitat can be seen on the north and west shores and has been described as a bog area or wetland because of the many trees that have fallen over the years and the plant material that has been deteriorating." I would break this up into two sentences.

You don't necessarily need to add the definition for oligotrophic lakes or thermal stratification. Instead you could link to the wiki page for those topics.

I would put a citation for the last sentence of your ecological research section.

I would add more information about other research being done on this lake.