User:GraceeeK/Associationism/Maugagne Peer Review

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GraceeeK, PB429 and JeremieCasavant


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Editing User:GraceeeK/Associationism - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Associationism - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
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The text you wrote is a very good addition to the already existing article. Your examples make the text easier to understand, which is great. I just have a few small comments. First, I think it would be a great idea if you talk a little bit about Lisa Feldman Barrett's background since we don't necessarily know who she is. Second, you probably already know but there is a couple of spelling and grammar errors so you can check that. Finally, it's not about the text you added, but more about the text already written. I think you could add information to the definition of associationism and to the applications section of the article because it's not very detailed and the paragraphs are a bit pitiful. Apart from that, you have added a very interesting part to this article!