User:Gracekline/2023–24 Fordham Rams men's basketball team/Morgmueller Peer Review

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 * 2023–24 Fordham Rams men's basketball team

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The article has a comprehensive overview of all the information one would need to fully understand the Fordham 2023-2024 Basketball team, from Previous Season to Offseason, to Recruiting Class Information, to their entire schedule. The only reference is the Fordham men's basketball schedule which I think is appropriate because most of the article is scheduling information that paints a picture of the team. The tone is ne utral and it does not feel like the article is trying to convince the audience of anything, even in explaining how they did not participate in a postseason tournament. The article contains a solid amount of links, so nearly anything someone could be curious about like the Rose Hill Gymnasium or the Atlantic 10 Conference has a reference point. The image added is just the Fordham logo, so it could possibly benefit from a picture of the team to get a visual of the quantifiable data presented. But, I understand if that is difficult with copyright. Overall, good job I did not catch any grammatical errors or issues with neutrality, reliability, or verifiability.