User:Gracekmeyers/Cartoon Network and LGBT representation/Roxlindy Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gracekmeyres


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Cartoon Network and LGBT representation



Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * 1) First, what does the article do well?
 * 2) Very structured outline of representation of LGBTQ+ characters in Cartoon Network
 * 3) What changes would you suggest the author apply to the article?
 * 4) I would add more to the comparison to other networks. In this, I would also make it a point to criticize what cartoon network does wrong in their representation. Maybe check to see what other characters are missing from the list provided
 * 5) Why would those changes be an improvement?
 * 6) This would help to keep the information up to date. Additionally, it would be helpful to add misrepresentation into the article to make sure the general public doesn't misunderstand the LGBTQ+ representation
 * 7) What's the most important thing the author could do to improve the article?
 * 8) I think it is most important to check if the characters provided are accurate and to make sure there are no characters missing
 * 9) Did you notice anything about the article you reviewed that could be applicable to your own article?
 * 10) yes, I am writing about bisexual erasure and this shows that cartoon network is contributing to bi representation in the media