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Intersex Rights in Colombia

 * Is the article's content relevant to the topic?
 * The article's content is relevant to the topic. However, there is definitely not enough content. It focuses solely on legal cases and precedents and does not talk at all about the social reality that intersex people face in Colombia.
 * Is it written neutrally?
 * The article is written completely neutrally.
 * Does each claim have a citation?
 * Each claim has a citation, but there are often blocks of text that only have one citation. I wonder if these blocks of text are paraphrased perhaps too closely and I think they could probably use more citations if at all possible.
 * Are the citations reliable?
 * The citations are mostly from books and political journals. However, Buzzfeed is cited at one point and that is not a reliable source.
 * Does the article tackle one of Wikipedia's equity gaps (coverage of historically underrepresented or misrepresented populations or subjects)?
 * This article does speak about a historically underrepresented population, but it needs a lot more work to be informative of the actual conditions that intersex people in Colombia live in.

LGBT History in Peru
There is almost no information in this article. Only one sentence is written and only one source is cited. The information that is there is reliably sources, relevant, and accurate, but there is such a lack of information in this article that is virtually useless. It needs to be built from the ground up. The article is support by both WikiProject Peru and WikiProject LGBT studies. It addresses a marginalized group and I think it would be valuable to make this article actually informative as the topic is notable and important.

Femicide in Mexico
This article's content is relevant to the topic, but fails to give any specific examples of women who have been impacted by femicide. While the language is neutral, it seems detached from the topic because there are no examples, which I would call almost too neutral. With the correct breadth of information and examples, this article could be more impactful because all of the facts will be provided. Each claim does not have a citation, although most do. However, the sources that are used are all academic journals. This article addresses a historically underrepresented population and could use some more work. It is a part of several WikiProjects.