User:Gracelyn099/Secondary (Chemistry)/Jessica M79 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gracelyn099, Joannaubc, Kmainse


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gracelyn099/Secondary_%28Chemistry%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Secondary (chemistry)
 * Secondary (chemistry)

Evaluate the drafted changes
- I like the definition of secondary right at the beginning. It helps to make sure everyone knows what is being talked about

- I think that you have split the various types into sections, but kept the original image

- I would try to keep the label of primary, secondary, tertiary, and quaternary on each individual image, not just the on under secondary alcohol, to ensure it is clear which is what

- Pictures are different sizes, can you make them uniform?

- I feel like this sentence ("More specifically, a secondary alcohol consists of an alpha carbon with one OH (alcohol) groups, a single hydrogen and a two "R group". Again, this "R" group can be a carbon in many different forms.") needs to move into the secondary alcohol section as that is what it is talking about. Currently it is just above that section.

- Your conclusion may be a bit more clear if it had a heading and was not just right below the secondary phosphines, but I really like what you have written, it is a good summary

- Good use of references