User:Gracelyn099/Secondary (Chemistry)/Rebekah Greenwood Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gracelyn099


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Sandbox Draft


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Secondary (chemistry)

Evaluate the drafted changes
- I like the various sections. I think a summary table (seen in the current article) could still be included at the top

- More links to other wikipedia pages could be added (ex: allylic, benzylic, ketone, etc)

- some example molecules would be nice too

- I think the overall article is very in depth... perhaps too in depth. The article's point is to explain what 'secondary' means; you might be able to remove sentences describing what an amine/amide/oxidation reaction is. Focusing on the definition and examples of secondary molecules would be more effective

- The sentence "to determine if an alcohol is secondary..." should be rewritten to something more similar to "An alcohol is deemed secondary if its carbonyl carbon..."

- For the phosphine section, are the examples using secondary phosphines or phosphines in general? If they are random phosphines, it would be better to have a secondary phosphine example... Maybe show a picture or a diagram too; there are many on wiki commons so it takes seconds (it's what I did lol)

- Good amount of references!