User:Gracemck/Mayanna Berrin v. Delta Airlines Inc./Anon0296 Peer Review

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 * Berrin also claims that this phrase caused people to buy Delta flight tickets who otherwise would not have purchased from them if this phrase was not used (bold part unnecessary)
 * what projects in Discovery of Mislaead Claims, unclear. define projects (assuming carbon offset ones?)
 * add links like for greenwashing litigation to other wiki pages
 * can go into more detail about which specific projects Delta says they support which are proven to be scientifically false
 * wordy overall
 * cite more
 * can give more detail about what delta does now to be sustainable since no longer does carbon credits. You mentioned reducing single use plastics but more detail, stats, and specifics would be helpful

Great job, enjoyed learning about this lawsuit!