User:Gracemuranaka/Socialist feminism/Oimoikosti Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gracemuranaka


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Sandbox
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Socialist feminism
 * Socialist feminism

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Your updated article body on toxic masculinity is much more fleshed out compared to the original. It includes good real-life examples that aid the point. There should be a way to add a link to the reference directly into the body of your work.