User:Graceyi11/Housing at the University of Washington/Lauren1500 Peer Review

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This is a great start!

"This hall has a great balance of study and student life resources and facilities ." This might be opinion, so it might not be needed but if it's voted the best hall by a poll or something and you can have a source for the info that would be ok.

"Although students are not required, about 71% of freshmen choose to live on campus to fully experience the college lifestyle and it's convenient and accessible."

Interesting! I might tweak it a little to have less opinion. I'd probably just have this part!

"Although students are not required, about 71% of freshmen choose to live on campus."

I would just say to work on it sounding "wikipidiean" I'm working on this myself. But I think it would help the article.