User:Gracielap906/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Suicide among LGBT youth

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
This article talks about how suicides a common occurrence within the LGBTQ youth. There is a lot of research in this article although they are very brief in explaining some of the reasons as to why this specific group is more prone to suicide. Its more centered towards gathering awareness so that there can be change within schools to stop bullying and discrimination against tis community. I want add more to this idea and specifically add more information as to why LGBTQ youth resort to suicide.

Evaluate the article
This article effectively goes through this topic in an informative and concise format. They don't send too much explaining one reason and they give very brief explanations as to why a specific piece of information is important. All their information is backed up by reliable sources and have been cited at the end of the page in order for readers to be able to go directly to the source from which they get the information from. Al though this article is at a good start, it still has plenty of information missing that is needed in order for this article to be a a useful resource to the public. Although they present studies that have been conducted they have failed to provide exact numbers with the evidence that they are bringing foward. While this topic is fairly broken down, the LGBTQ community and suicide is still too broad of a subject to only have as little information as this page does. There needs to be more ficus in depth of the different sub groups being addressed and come froth with evidence that supports the main idea of the article. This article has been grass as C-Class.