User:Graciepitts/Cherry cola/Jasonguoo Peer Review

General info
Graciepitts
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Cherry_cola&diff=1217470752&oldid=1199304138
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
Nice edits. I like that you added some information about what cola is and what ingredients are in the drink. I believe a lot of people may not know about this and it could be helpful information for people to know. I think there are more contents you could potentially add to this article because the original passage is short. I would suggest talking about how cherry cola was invented, why it is best seller for 13-18 year-olds, and the flavor profile of the drink. There may be some articles that review tastings, so it could be interesting to refer to some of these articles as well.