User:Graciepitts/Cherry cola/Lortega3 Peer Review

I thought the information that was added was very relevant. I had trouble accessing the links in your bibliography but had no trouble in the sandbox. I thought the pictures were great, I wonder if more could be added, especially considering packaging tends to be a large contributor to perceptions of this drink. Also wondering if nodding to the new wave of probiotic sodas and what that looks like in terms of Cherry Cola would be interesting. I thought all the information was very well put together and consistently neutral.

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