User:Grackle.cackle/Protracted social conflict/Kreiswig Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Grackle.cackle


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Protracted social conflict
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
I'd like to see more links to the information you're referencing. Specifically, in the text, and not just in the resource list. I saw more of that later in your edits, but not as much in the beginning. But, this is something that you noted and are working on. So, I get it! Also, what does ARIA stand for? Looks like you piled up a good amount of resources, everything else looks great!