User:Grahamal/Animal model of autism/Sara8887 Peer Review

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Grahamal
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I think you included great information that was relevant to the topic. The two things I would suggest is to maintain neutrality in your writing. There is one section in which you state "it's essential for researchers to avoid overstating the relevance of these model systems" I would suggest to rephrase the wording in that sentence to something a little less opinionated. You cited two articles which is great! One is for 2022 and one if for 2018. I feel like it so hard to find updated articles but it may be better to try and find something more recent than 2018.