User:Grahamal/Animal model of autism/Zclayt Peer Review

I have found after reading the information in your sandbox about Animal model of autism, that the information that you took from the article is in great detail and seem to be very relevant to the topic and study at hand. I think that you did a very good job at including all information need to include. I would only add more to the lead paragraph and any additional references if there were any.

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