User:Grainneschroeder/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Intersectionality

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose the article on Intersectionality due to it's theme being so prevalent in our class. The topic of intersectionality is important due to its rising awareness and ability to broaden the way we look at social justice issues. Initially, I have found this article to be quite informative in explaining the components of intersectionality, as well as how it relates to oppression and social justice movements as a whole. As far as the tone goes, you can see a neutral understanding Intersectionality with a portion of the article which raises important points about its criticisms.

Evaluate the article
The article on Intersectionality begins with a good lead, introducing what exactly the topic is and give us familiar terms to relate to it. The content includes information on Kimberly Crenshaw, who coined the term Intersectionality, as well as providing examples, differing points of view, and how it looks in different contexts. While the majority of the sources seem reliable, there are some news articles included which could be replaced by more peer-reviewed sources. I have not found any grammatical errors in the writing, and the article is organized into clear and concise sections. There are a few images that are helpful and impactful in understanding Intersectionality, however, I think the use of more images would be beneficial. There is not much discussion going on in the talk page, and while one member has stated they believe the article does not have enough useful information, I do not fully agree with their point. Overall, I believe that this is a well written article.