User:GrandeCuy15/Louise Beavers/Foxjd0 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

GrandCuy15

Link to draft you're reviewing


 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Louise_Beavers&diff=1150705294&oldid=1141591189


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think you significantly changed this article for the better. Before your edits, the article didn't touch enough on Louise's accomplishments or enough of her background. Not only did you provide more context, but you provided a large portion of her life that was missing and influential to who she was. There is not nearly enough information that shows the impact she had on the black community.