User:Grantloseke/Santa Maria Gloriosa dei Frari/Wortmann2019 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Grantloseke


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Santa Maria Gloriosa dei Frari

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead:


 * The lead has been updated to reflect the new content added by my peer.
 * The lead has a good introductory sentence.
 * Information regarding the exterior was added, rather than past information just covering the interior. This was done in a concise manner.

Content:


 * Content that was added was relevant to the topic. Grant added reasoning behind the change in church design based on changes that were happening in people's day to day lives.
 * There were sections added strictly relating to the architectural features of the church. Also, there were specific details added regarding certain architectural features within the church.

Tone and Balance:


 * The added content is talked in a neutral tone.

Sources and References:


 * There were three references added to this section. Which helps back up the added information.
 * The sources range from outdated to current. This is understandable because the church that the article is about is very old.
 * The sources are written by a diverse spectrum of authors.
 * Plus, these are peer reviewed articles.

Organization


 * The content added is well-written.
 * The content is well-organized. New sections were created were necessary, and other information was added to previously made sections where fit.

Images and Media


 * An image was added that enhanced the understanding about the location of the church.
 * The image is well-captioned. Plus, they adhere to copyright regulations.

Overall Impressions


 * The content added improved the understanding of the architectural components of this church.
 * Therefore, the content improved the overall quality of the article.
 * I believe the next editor can add details about why the design related to the time period. Therefore, readers will understand why it was made in Venetian Style.