User:Grapesszz/Potassium bitartrate/Shenassak Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Grapesszz, Ddoroc


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User
 * Grapesszz/Potassium_bitartrate?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Potassium bitartrate

Evaluate the drafted changes
- production section still needs to be completed (if planning to do so)

- lead should be edited to mention the sections of the article

- there are many sections in the original article that still need references if you are planning on editing those areas (Household use, medicinal use, cosmetics, alternatives, chemistry)

- Occurence section was greatly improved by the new information and references added

- Science behind baking section looks good

- could add an image of what potassium bicarbonate looks like